Naras: Picking FightsShikamaru’s pained huff brought Yoshino’s mind back to present time and place. Her mind had gone horribly off track and, by getting lost in her memories, she had applied too much pressure to a large, harsh bruise on her son’s face. She mentally reprimanded herself, immediately retracting her hands from the young man’s face and dunking her too-dry cloth back into the ice cold bucket of water by her side.
The fic is actually very good. Some minor mistakes, but the freshness of the story, as well the impact it had on me made me forget them... I love the shipping, and I congratulate you I think there was no OOC at any time. The way Yoshino acted, the laziness of Shikamaru and Shikaku hit the spot.
I wish i could know why temari decided she wanted to kill shikamaru, but that0s just a fangirl curiosity....
Loved the litle detail at the end of it.
I would higly recommend this fic, and absolutely belongs to my favorite. Keep on writting!